Causes of Happiness
Happiness is an emotion of human when people feel satisfy or cheerful of something. It might be every people’s wishes that being happy in their days of lives. But what can make people happy? Simply answer the question, lose some weight, get a new car, or marry someone they love. There are too many things can make people happy, but it is not easy for everyone to feel happy all the time. Thus, it makes people more likely to aspire happiness. In my opinion, the basic happiness is from health, love and living with goals.
Living with a healthy body is the first element for happiness. People need to be healthy to do things they like. With a healthy body, one can do sports, travel, enjoy his life. However, there are too many examples that people pay much efforts on their work to earn money without taking care about their health. The results for these people is they do not have chance enjoy the happiness which they want to get from wealth. So people should balance their time for work and keep health. Moreover, if people are healthy, they can spend more time with their families and friends. It is also another cause of happiness which comes next.
The English writer, Sydney Smith, said that, “To love and to be loved is the greatest happiness of existence”. Since ancient times, love always have a miracle power. There are different kinds of love. For instance, love between parents and children, love between friends and love between couples. People can feel happiness from people who love them, and they also can be happy when they love others. Because people who love you will care for you and they will give you a hand if you are in trouble. People will feel lucky that they are able to have people who love them. In other hands, when a person have someone he loves, his life will be richer and more meaningful. Moreover, if the one who he love is happy, he well happy too. Love makes happiness comes easier.
The last cause of happiness is a bit difficult, living with goals. Living with goals does not mean everyone need to have a lofty ideal for their life. Goals can be temporary and changed. First people can make goals which they are interested in and easier to achieve. Gradually, people can make others goals which is more challenging. There is a greater chance for a person who likes what he does to achieve, and achievement makes people happy. When one is engaged in something, he can get happiness not only from the result but also the process.
In conclusion, the most three important causes of happiness is a healthy body, a good emotional life and having a objective to achieve. Happiness can be easy to get but also can be difficult to feel. People have only to understand the reasons of happiness to make it easier to get through happy lives.
To Jinling Tian from Do Hee Kim 201100361
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your essay. I especially like the way how you quoted a saying of a writer, and I really like the quote. :)
1. Thesis Statement :In my opinion, the basic happiness is from health, love and living with goals
2. Topic sentence: each body paragraph does contain a topic sentence that defines a specific cause. health, love and living with goals
3. The causes are explained in a logical way. The writer elaborates on its causes by providing its effects.
4. The writer uses connectors such as thus, for instance, moreover..
5. The writer concludes by restating the causes.
6. The writer evaluates her own way of pursueing happiness. She believes by simply understanding the causes of happiness, it will lead them to live their lives more happier.
Happiness
ReplyDeleteHappiness is an emotion of human when people feel satisfy or cheerful of something. It might be every people’s wishes that being happy in their days of lives. But what can make people happy? Simply answer the question, lose some weight, get a new car, or marry someone they love. There are too many things can make people happy, but it is not easy for everyone to feel happy all the time. Thus, it makes people more likely to aspire happiness. The basic happiness is from health, love and living with goals.
Living with a healthy body is the first element for happiness. People need to be healthy to do things they like. With a healthy body, one can do sports, travel and enjoy his life. However, there are too many examples that people pay much effort on their work to earn money without taking care about their health. They want to get from wealth; as a result of, these people do not have chance to enjoy the happiness. So people should balance their time for work and keep health. Moreover, if people are healthy, they can spend more time with their families and friends. It is also another cause of happiness which comes next.
The English writer, Sydney Smith, said that, “To love and to be loved is the greatest happiness of existence”. Since ancient times, love always has a miracle power. There are different kinds of love. For instance, love between parents and children, love between friends and love between couples. People can feel happiness from people who love them, and they also can be happy when they love others. Because people who love you will care for you and they will give you a hand if you are in trouble. People will feel lucky that they are able to have people who love them. In other hands, when a person has someone he loves, his life will be richer and more meaningful. Moreover, if the one who he love is happy, he well happy too. Love makes happiness comes easier.
The last cause of happiness is a bit difficult, living with goals. Living with goals does not mean everyone needs to have a lofty ideal for their life. Goals can be temporary and changed. First people can make goals which they are interested in and easier to achieve. Gradually, people can make others goals which are more challenging. There is a greater chance for a person who likes what he does to achieve, and achievement makes people happy. When one is engaged in something, he can get happiness not only from the result but also the process.
In conclusion, the most three important causes of happiness is a healthy body, a good emotional life and having an objective to achieve. Happiness can be easy to get but also can be difficult to feel. People have only to understand the reasons of happiness to make it easier to get through happy lives.